Man can not live by bread alone, it is the same with politics..
So here is one of the poems I am working one to get packaged to see if I can get it published one of these days.
Tell me what you think.....
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Star Dust, Bones and the Cosmos
We live in the Sol star system, our sun now in middle age.
It has eight planetary children, or is it nine, one’s perspective.
Our home is a stony world, third from our sun, called earth or Terra,
With a child of its own, a beautiful and deadly place we call the Moon.
Terra has a rotating liquid iron core, that gives us protection
From the very lethal cosmic radiation, in which sprang all life.
We consider ourselves flesh and bones, Intellect and philosophy,
But in reality we are made of star stuff and its deadly energy.
With your eyes on the heavens, the never ending night sky,
Did you see the lights winking, as they fell all around you ?
Did you hear the Cosmos calling, its music, the stellar serenade,
The comet waving its tail when it passed, the Morning and Evening Stars.
It is this star stuff we are made of, why the Milky Way beckons,
Calling us to return to our true home, for we are star born.
The scientist Carl Sagan once said “It is far better to grasp the universe
as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring."
To enable us to return to our home, to the stars, to the Milky Way itself,
We have to grasp the universe with our mind and body, in its true reality.
Using our reason and logic will not lead us astray, it gives us our strength,
Our faith, for our road to the Cosmos, our vision for the future.
However, maintaining the psychosis of a persistent and satisfying delusion,
Will only lead our species down the path of pain and sorrow, to our extinction.
I for one believe in our future, there is a destiny for the human race,
We need to take the lessons we have learned with us to interstellar space.
When it’s my time to die, the Cosmos will show the way and give me guidance.
It will answer my questions of what form and where in the universe I'll be going.
When my bones return to star dust, will you hear the ghost that's calling,
On Terra, in fire, earth or water, or is it just the stellar wind come singing.
Nothing last forever, even the earth and sun slip away, death and rebirth,
The cycle starts again, new universe, new sun, new planetary children.
But for now we are lost in space, the sun comes up and shines all around us,
The earth is our own, and in our care, which reflects on us and our future.
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Re: Poem for the day
I like it Curtis and it's worthy of a "Digg"
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Thank you Ross,
I listened to some old songs that used to be my favorites during and right after High School they gave me inspiration for this particular theme.
Serenade by the Steve Miller Band, Desperado by Alice Cooper and Sail Away by Styx. Plus reading Carl Sagan always gives me inspiration.
The part of the song Serenade, were the lyrics goes,
"Did you see the lights
As they fell all around you
Did you hear the music
A serenade from the stars "
the lights falling lights around you, brings back memories at being at sea on a moonless night away from all lights of civilization, the Stars literally seem to fall around you. It was one of the most immense and beautiful sights I have ever seen.
Anway
Curtis
Re: Poem for the day
Another master-baiting attempt, Curtis? Nice try....
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Your double entendra aside...
What part of poem do you not understand...
Here let me help you with the definition from the free dictionary online
Poem n.
experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way,
characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive
power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor,
and rhyme.
rather than in prose.
composition written with an intensity or beauty of language more
characteristic of poetry than of prose.
A creation, object, or experience having beauty suggestive of poetry.
Re: Poem for the day
Sorry, bud. I left my feminine side a long time ago. I prefer DIRECT communication, without taking the chance to leave anything open to interpretation. You, obviously, don't. Or, you could be trolling for reactions again. Either way, I don't care.
If you have something to say, just say it.
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haha, M.F. you are an intresting character. Don't tell me that you do not enjoy people commenting on your posts, if you truly love your mind, than a good argument such as this one is the best exercise for it. So why not incite, and enjoy reactions?
Re: Poem for the day
Talk about someone who is both insecure and paranoid.
How much more direct do you want me to get. Here is a poem, please read and give feedback..
Or are you refering to me not answering everybodiy's comments or a select few due to a technical problem that Pagan is aware of and working on.
However if you think I am here just trolling for reactions, the smart thing to do was to just ignore me. Rolls reversed, that is what I would of done
Curtis
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I have learned to assume after such comments. Your projections aside, I would submit that poetry is a very indirect method and can be broadly interpreted.
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You should go back and read the comment in context. It was between me and Pagan only at Pagan. Part of an old joke I think he forgot about or did not realize he was part of now.
It had nothing to do with you anyone else here. Don't take it for anything else.
If you think I am playing games with my writing then why are you even bothering to respond. That is the real question here since you apparently do not have the ability to be a poetry critic.
Curtis
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I happen to agree with M.F. use of the word broad when describing how poems can be interpreted. I myself am a musician, and as with poetry I find that my lyrics may be interpreted differently. With poems howeverthere is a wider range of perspective that can be obtained when reading the text. With music, there is sound, tone, and pattern which is clearly defined. In traditional written poetry there is room, not room for error, but room for thought. Your poem is very unique because it is built more from solid description, rather than vague words which an be understood in thousands of ways. whereas many other poets such as myself, are apt to build puzzles, and intricately hidden meanings within their work, you seem to educate, and leave little, if any room for different interpretations.
I'm not criticizing either of you, I just happen to enjoy making myself heard. Rather ironic, as my alias is UnHerd, but that itself has a completely different meaning. It is a play on words which a true critic, or creator of poetry can understand.